I sent an email earlier on what we had so far to get some input from David.
Some things he mentioned were minor spelling, but for now I will post the couple critical things that need to be tightened up.
1) David Peterson made something incredible. He has created a very real language for a mythical people, and by incorporating culture, as well as grammar, it makes it seem, they actually might have existed….at some time, somewhere, someplace.
We had:
Devidi Peterson move vekhikh ma vezhvena ma kima. Me move lekhes sekke tawaka ha vojea ido. Majin kash lekh ee vi osaan atthirari jin voji, kash anha dirgak mevoji ish vekhi.
(I asked about the "dream people too)
DP's response:
I'm not sure why "kima" is used here... It means "original", but that doesn't appear in your translation. I see what you mean about using "fake". Hmm... Perhaps use some other adjective like "strong" (haji)? Change "vekhi" to "vekhish". I'm not sure what the part before the comma is supposed to mean... I'm getting, "And while the language goes through the life path are these people"?
2) My favorite "Game of Thrones" phrase in Dothraki is "Anha vosoon avvos. Anha qoy zhavvorsi," because even if everyone is not blood of the dragon, everyone is someone. Everyone is special.
We were at:
Anha astak astezhor Dothraki haji Vilajerosh Adori ki: "Anha vosoon avvos. Anha qoy zhavvorsi," ma me astezhori hajinaan m'eyak vos qoy zhavvorsi, vosma eyak voj. Eyak davrae k'athesinazari.
DP's response:
I'd say "me vos eyak qoy zhavvorsi". Not sure what's meant by "athesinazar"... Everyone is "differently" useful? If so, that's pretty clever!
Zhey ingsve, I did get the word "astezhori" in a sentence but not an explanation for it. Just the sentence.
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It's great you confirmed the meaning with DP.
Maybe we can get a word for "special"
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Or for "Everyone is special, " how about "Everyone is a unique gift."
Eyak voj azh esina. ?