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Beginners / [A Query from Reddit] Could someone grammar check this poem?
« on: November 19, 2013, 05:31:24 pm »
I wrote it for a school assignment. The teacher probably doesn't care if it's proper Lekh Dothraki, but I do. Here's what I have. (It's a [villanelle](http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Villanelle))
Ven dothrak, arakh anni affisak.
Az hranni vithale hatif Chafis
Qoyi arakh anni eqorasak.
Hrazef ann' najahak esittesak,
Fin dothraki qafa mae Qafis?
Ven dothrak, arakh anni affisak.
Fin vilajero nakhalot vorsakh?
Vilajero finne anh' najah dis!
Qoyi arakh anni eqorasak.
Anha vi Havazh Dothraki dothrak
Ma filkaki azhi azho kemis.
Ven dothrak, arakh anni affisak.
Anha nhara dozgoon filkakoon riss'k
Jahak anhi vitisheratneak kis
qoyi arakh anni eqorasak.
Anha she hrazef anhi ahhasak
arakh anhi, affin 'jjin “Sorohis!”
Ven dothrak, arakh anni affisak.
Qoyi Arakh anni eqorasak.
Ven dothrak, arakh anni affisak.
Az hranni vithale hatif Chafis
Qoyi arakh anni eqorasak.
Hrazef ann' najahak esittesak,
Fin dothraki qafa mae Qafis?
Ven dothrak, arakh anni affisak.
Fin vilajero nakhalot vorsakh?
Vilajero finne anh' najah dis!
Qoyi arakh anni eqorasak.
Anha vi Havazh Dothraki dothrak
Ma filkaki azhi azho kemis.
Ven dothrak, arakh anni affisak.
Anha nhara dozgoon filkakoon riss'k
Jahak anhi vitisheratneak kis
qoyi arakh anni eqorasak.
Anha she hrazef anhi ahhasak
arakh anhi, affin 'jjin “Sorohis!”
Ven dothrak, arakh anni affisak.
Qoyi Arakh anni eqorasak.